I starded out just putting cool sounds together and my teacher Mr. Rubuse added a part that I kept cause it adds to the wierdness and creepy sounding to it.
I really need your descriptions to be better. I find that when you put a lot of thought into a project, it's easy to come up with soemthing to say. If you didn't put a lot of thought into your project... well then, you should probably rethink the work you are submitting.
This piece has great potential: a solid bass and snare beat, a creepy bass sound and a high pitched, fast moving synth sound.
All you need to do is combine the elements in a logical way. Model it after something you've already heard.
This piece doesn't seem to have much form or direction. I like the bass line, and it is in the correct register, but it doesn't seem to go anywhere.
When you write a piece of music, it's like writing a short story. There are characters (your instruments) and they need to react with one another, and move forward together, and somehow arrive at an ending.
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I really need your descriptions to be better. I find that when you put a lot of thought into a project, it's easy to come up with soemthing to say. If you didn't put a lot of thought into your project... well then, you should probably rethink the work you are submitting.
This piece has great potential: a solid bass and snare beat, a creepy bass sound and a high pitched, fast moving synth sound.
All you need to do is combine the elements in a logical way. Model it after something you've already heard.
This piece doesn't seem to have much form or direction. I like the bass line, and it is in the correct register, but it doesn't seem to go anywhere.
When you write a piece of music, it's like writing a short story. There are characters (your instruments) and they need to react with one another, and move forward together, and somehow arrive at an ending.
I'm not getting that here.
Mr. R
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